tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147608.post112623892535443523..comments2023-07-10T01:35:15.227-07:00Comments on Intelligent Ash: Jagged DreamsMax Bouillethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13739851882417734992noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147608.post-1126926909341138252005-09-16T20:15:00.000-07:002005-09-16T20:15:00.000-07:00it took me a while to post a comment to this one. ...it took me a while to post a comment to this one. i love reading it over and over again. the images are so vivid. the way you describe it, it's so unlike any other poet's style that i can't help myself. i just want to read it over and over! <BR/>i picture the character: scrawny and dirty. no matter how many times i read the poem, i can't see his face but the menacing and defensive aura he emits makes my hair stand on end!cargwapshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255623841643008436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147608.post-1126358992500722562005-09-10T06:29:00.000-07:002005-09-10T06:29:00.000-07:00He scares the crap out of me.I like him already. ^...He scares the crap out of me.<BR/><BR/>I like him already. ^_^<BR/><BR/>(Hmm. I'm not really sure if I'm referring to the persona in the poem, or the author. Heehee.)<BR/><BR/>On another note:<BR/>2 poems in 4 days!<BR/>You're spoiling me!<BR/>(Encore, please.<BR/>Pretty please...<BR/>*chuckles*)S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147608.post-1126258272834266992005-09-09T02:31:00.000-07:002005-09-09T02:31:00.000-07:00I can feel him trembling. Eyes peering out from wh...I can feel him trembling. Eyes peering out from where he is hiding, knowing that inevitably, he will be found out.<BR/><BR/>You made Sisyphus just a tad bit luckier. Your recalcitrant persona weaves his way in an illusion of freedom, never knowing when the strings will be pulled.<BR/><BR/>I like the part about the broom and glue. <BR/><BR/>Which reminds me, after reading this, I feel like a very famous egg who needs to be put back together again.blue roguehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09231030231695181505noreply@blogger.com