tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147608.post112596024595332188..comments2023-07-10T01:35:15.227-07:00Comments on Intelligent Ash: Friends of Words I Once PennedMax Bouillethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13739851882417734992noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147608.post-1126285260076614222005-09-09T10:01:00.000-07:002005-09-09T10:01:00.000-07:00^____^ hello! that was, as expected, beautiful. as...^____^ hello! that was, as expected, beautiful. as always, your words echo in my head and resonate in the recesses of my heart. this poem impresses an emotion of bitterness on me. <BR/><BR/>(each word falling<BR/>like loose change<BR/>into the cup<BR/>of vagrant angels<BR/>too eager<BR/>to kick the<BR/>shit out of<BR/>a forgotten poet<BR/>who blasphemed<BR/>one too many times.)<BR/><BR/>but somehow i think you're the one who's mocking your angels and not the other way around. ^_^Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147608.post-1126099416785900242005-09-07T06:23:00.000-07:002005-09-07T06:23:00.000-07:00Wwaaahh! (Forgive the incoherent outburst... I am ...<B>Wwaaahh!</B> (Forgive the incoherent outburst... I am so excited to read a new poem of yours, after months of deprivation, that I might pee right where I'm sitting. Haha. ^_^)<BR/><BR/>Uhurm. This reads as though it were written with a sense of urgency -- the one a writer has when he/she can't pen the words fast enough. There is an element of frustration, too, with regard to the situation portrayed, that I can almost imagine the pressure of the pen (or the intensity of fingers on the keyboard) while this piece is written.<BR/><BR/>And the frankness, too, is there, staring the reader in the eye.<BR/><BR/>*thud*<BR/><BR/>Reading you leaves me in a state of drugged "high." ^_^<BR/><BR/>I wish you well, dear. (And I do hope to read more of your one-of-a-kind poetry.)S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9147608.post-1126084493668464022005-09-07T02:14:00.000-07:002005-09-07T02:14:00.000-07:00they have a term for this max, i think its word ju...they have a term for this max, i think its <B>word junkie</B>. :)<BR/><BR/><I>(each word falling<BR/>like loose change<BR/>into the cup<BR/>of vagrant angels<BR/>too eager<BR/>to kick the<BR/>shit out of<BR/>a forgotten poet<BR/>who blasphemed<BR/>one too many times.)</I><BR/><BR/>you're one of the very few people who can write "kick the shit out" and talk of seraphim hobos at the same time. <BR/>or maybe it's just because i get a kick out of anything blasphemous. :)<BR/><BR/>well worth the wait, max. thank you for making me exhale after such a long, indrawn inhalation, hankering for your next poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com